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[pintos-anon] / sigcse2009 / rest.tex

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 In the future, we will expand Pintos's analysis capabilities to
 provide quantitative information  and include realistic
 device models.
-We also considering the extension of Pintos to multiple
-CPUs, and the development of assignments that involve
+We are also considering extending Pintos to multiple
+CPUs, and developing assignments that involve
 networking and interprocess communication (IPC).
 Although feedback from our industrial affiliates, who compare
-students having Pintos to students having taken course that use
-less concrete or external approaches, is highly favorable,
+students having used Pintos to students having taken courses 
+that use less concrete or external approaches, is highly favorable,
 we need to perform a formal evaluation comparing learning 
 outcomes using Pintos to other alternatives.