-Static and dynamic analysis tools are now being widely used; an OS course should
-be no exception. We have extended the QEMU emulator~\cite{Bellard2005QEMU} to
-perform tailored analyses that point out errors such as race conditions.
+Dynamic analysis tools are now being widely used in software development;
+an OS course should be no exception.
+In Section~\ref{sec:dynamicanalysis}, we describe how we
+extended the QEMU emulator~\cite{Bellard2005QEMU} to
+perform tailored analyses that find errors such as race conditions.