-CVS is not the best version control system out there. However, it's
-free, it's ubiquitous, and it's fairly easy to use. More to the
-point, it's already available on the Leland machines you're using for
+CVS is not the best version control system out there, but it's
+free, it's fairly easy to use, and
+it's already available on the Leland machines you're using for